Blog Post #2

The Great Dynamics For Writing

 

Figure1. Leave Comments

 

 As I posted the comments on student's writing, I could learn these two things about my English writing. First, It helped me improve my English writing skills. While I reading a friendly piece of advices from other, I could correct my error. For instance, in my Descriptive Paragraph, Doogi said that my writing was so detailed and easy to understand, but I had mentioned 'Most importantly' twice from different points. So he was little confused of them. After I reading this comment, I went over my writing. I found that I had said 'Most importantly' twice that should be included on one point. Thus, I could decide that set the one point which to explore more deeply on the next writing. Also, when I posted the comments on other blogs, It taught me various expression that I hadn't even thought of. The title of Moonju's Reasons/Example Paragraph showed me the example of good title. While I examined the expression ‘Water: Cheap Medicine’, It led to me thinking about the title that helps people understand easily about essay. Second, It motivated me to study English Writing skills. Bora Seo mentioned on my Reasons/Example Paragraph that my writing was interesting and informative, and was the best thing that she had ever read. It made me happy, and I decided to make a better article. Meanwhile, as I commented other blogs, I found that many students had great skills of English Writing. So, I could study hard under the stimulus of them. Like this, the work of posting comments enhanced my writing ability, and I think it is a important dynamic for trying to be a fascinating essay. 

 

 

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Figure1. Comment Back Comments Graphics, www.allgraphics123.com (accessed Oct 31, 2015)
송두기's comment on http://ssoyee.blogspot.kr/2015/09/study-is-easiest-thing-in-my-life.html , Sep 30, 2015, (accessed Oct 31,2015)
이문주, ‘Water: Cheap Medicine’ ,http://lmj3519.blogspot.kr/2015/10/mid-term-exam-paragraph.html, Oct 10, 2015, (accessed Oct 31,2015)
서보라's comment on http://ssoyee.blogspot.kr/2015/10/creation-of-new-media.html , Oct 12, 2015, (accessed Oct 31, 2015)