Blog Post #2

The Great Dynamics For Writing

 

Figure1. Leave Comments

 

 As I posted the comments on student's writing, I could learn these two things about my English writing. First, It helped me improve my English writing skills. While I reading a friendly piece of advices from other, I could correct my error. For instance, in my Descriptive Paragraph, Doogi said that my writing was so detailed and easy to understand, but I had mentioned 'Most importantly' twice from different points. So he was little confused of them. After I reading this comment, I went over my writing. I found that I had said 'Most importantly' twice that should be included on one point. Thus, I could decide that set the one point which to explore more deeply on the next writing. Also, when I posted the comments on other blogs, It taught me various expression that I hadn't even thought of. The title of Moonju's Reasons/Example Paragraph showed me the example of good title. While I examined the expression ‘Water: Cheap Medicine’, It led to me thinking about the title that helps people understand easily about essay. Second, It motivated me to study English Writing skills. Bora Seo mentioned on my Reasons/Example Paragraph that my writing was interesting and informative, and was the best thing that she had ever read. It made me happy, and I decided to make a better article. Meanwhile, as I commented other blogs, I found that many students had great skills of English Writing. So, I could study hard under the stimulus of them. Like this, the work of posting comments enhanced my writing ability, and I think it is a important dynamic for trying to be a fascinating essay. 

 

 

Reference: 

Figure1. Comment Back Comments Graphics, www.allgraphics123.com (accessed Oct 31, 2015)
송두기's comment on http://ssoyee.blogspot.kr/2015/09/study-is-easiest-thing-in-my-life.html , Sep 30, 2015, (accessed Oct 31,2015)
이문주, ‘Water: Cheap Medicine’ ,http://lmj3519.blogspot.kr/2015/10/mid-term-exam-paragraph.html, Oct 10, 2015, (accessed Oct 31,2015)
서보라's comment on http://ssoyee.blogspot.kr/2015/10/creation-of-new-media.html , Oct 12, 2015, (accessed Oct 31, 2015)

 



Audio Unit

                              The Creation of New Media

 

  Content industry has changed along side the development of the Internet in these two ways. First of all, Many kinds of media has been developed by using the Internet. For example, The Internet has become a new place for people to read comics. Numerous users are fascinated with this media named 'Webtoon' as it is accessibility to enter and able to see in one glance all contents. Another example, the comic variety show has been aired on the Internet. In the example at the top, there is the program '신서유기'. It was modeled the TV show '1박 2일', and has gained popularity with many people. It also generates huge income. '신서유기’ uploads its one episode divided into 10 sections, and it makes a profit whenever one person log on to the one section. It is expected to cause a lot of income if we thinking about World wide web users. Second, Platform has become more important. As individual artists are getting easy to perform, it leads to supply exceeding. For instance, artists could be only possible to advertise their work through the company before. But, using the Internet, they can easily perform their work to upload the website, such as Naver, Youtube. It also has the benefits that can share across the border, anyone can access, and doesn't cost to enter. However, it causes the contents to be saturated. Therefore, Platform that managing it efficiently has become important. Youtube, which is the representative platform in Worldwide, offers various videos for its users selectively. The contents that Youtube wants to show is located in the main page of its website, or if users log on to some videos, it suggests others optionally. Thus, customers have the contents that chosen by platform first, and it has influence on sales according to advertisement of platform. To conclude, a trend of content industry has altered in a new direction on the Internet, and it is expected that their influence continues to expand on the media.  



Reasons/Example Paragraph

                  The Creation of New Media

 

  Content industry has changed along side the development of the Internet in these two ways. First of all, Many kinds of media has been developed by using the Internet. For example, The Internet has become a new place for people to read comics. Numerous users are fascinated with this media named 'Webtoon' as it is accessibility to enter and able to see in one glance all contents. Another example, the comic variety show has been aired on the Internet. In the example at the top, there is the program '신서유기'. It was modeled the TV show '1박 2일', and has gained popularity with many people. It also generates huge income. '신서유기’ uploads its one episode divided into 10 sections, and it makes a profit whenever one person log on to the one section. It is expected to cause a lot of income if we thinking about World wide web users.





Figure1. Naver Webtoon

Figure2. '신서유기' poster



Figure3. Youtube Logo

Second, Platform has become more important. As individual artists are getting easy to perform, it leads to supply exceeding. For instance, artists could be only possible to advertise their work through the company before. But, using the Internet, they can easily perform their work to upload the website, such as Naver, Youtube. It also has the benefits that can share across the border, anyone can access, and doesn't cost to enter. However, it causes the contents to be saturated. Therefore, Platform that managing it efficiently has become important. Youtube, which is the representative platform in Worldwide, offers various videos for its users selectively. The contents that Youtube wants to show is located in the main page of its website, or if users log on to some videos, it suggests others optionally. Thus, customers have the contents that chosen by platform first, and it has influence on sales according to advertisement of platform. To conclude, a trend of content industry has altered in a new direction on the Internet, and it is expected that their influence continues to expand on the media.

 

Reference: 

 Figure1. 부산 일보사 멀티미디어부, "네이버 웹툰 4대 미녀는 누구? "실력에 미모까지 겸비했네" ", 부산일보, October 23, 2014, http://news20.busan.com/controller/newsController.jsp?newsId=20141023000256  (accessed Oct 10, 2015)

Figure2. 표재민, "[Oh!쎈 초점] ‘신서유기’ 누가 걱정했나? 시끌벅적 유랑기가 남긴 것", OSEN, October 2, 2015,http://osen.mt.co.kr/article/G1110259426 (accessed Oct 10, 2015) 
Figure3.

롤매니아, "세계에서 가장 큰 동영상 보관 창고 유투브~", Naver Blog, Febrary  18, 2013,

http://blog.naver.com/qpyokk10/50163261539 (accessed Oct 10, 2015)