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Figure1. Inside of the Cafe |
I prefer to study in a cafe rather than in a study room. I think its spatial arrangement is the most ideal atmosphere to study. I'd like to browse this feature divided into these three points, the noise some people inside are making, the internal structure of a cafe and arranging furniture. First, there should be some noise to stay focus on my study. The noise such as people are talking each other, typing on the computer and grinding coffee helps me to concentrate my work. Second, it is important to make its interior more comfortable. There are several delicate lights, which shine yellow hanging from the ceiling and six special lights shaped like flashlight for shining three pieces of art work in the above of the side. Also, two pieces of art work, which makes people mind more fresh is below the special lights and hanging on the wall. The opposite side of the wall, there is also hanging the picture, and rectangle interior item. And, the window shaped rectangle is the next to the item, which has white check pattern bars. There also has a door, which can pass though, it has a white check pattern similar the window. About the floor, I like the woody-pattern and I think it seems like more nature-friendly. Most importantly, the space which I study should be separated from the counter. Because, I think it feels more private space. Finally, this is the most important thing; furniture layout. There are three sofas in front of the window, so the people who sit these sofas seems like more cozy to talk about something to each other. In the below of two pieces of art work, there are two tables and partitions each of the tables for studying alone. And there have wider size of three tables in the middle of the space, which can people take up more space to study or do their work. In the edge of the room, the tables and the chairs are suitable for talking two people. The spatial structure elements are the important features to focus on my work. Thus, If I arrange my special place for studying which has these features, I could tell that 'Study is the easiest thing :)'
Reference :
Figure1. J David H., "Study area upstairs for student", Yelp, October 5, 2013,
http://www.yelp.com/biz_photos/starbucks-charlottesville-4?select=gszWUyj4ME7tvT2TSGvz8w (accessed Sep 26, 2015)
Figure1. J David H., "Study area upstairs for student", Yelp, October 5, 2013,
http://www.yelp.com/biz_photos/starbucks-charlottesville-4?select=gszWUyj4ME7tvT2TSGvz8w (accessed Sep 26, 2015)
Dear So Young,
답글삭제I was surprised to see that your name is same as mine (:
hahaha!
I would like to make small suggestions that could help your paragraph.
You might want to add a word 'to' between the words, "talking each other" in eleventh sentence of the paragraph. (Talking to each other)
Secondly, you have listed three examples of the noise- people's chattering, coffe's grinding, and computer's typing. Since there are pluray ways to describe the noise, you would want to say that they "help" you to concentrate on your work. (In the thirteenth sentence, it is written as a singular form of the verb, helps.)
Besides those trivial errors, I certainly enjoyed reading yours and did agree with your ideal furniture layout (: Private place far from the counter is indeed important! haha
Best wishes,
So Young Yoon
Hi So Young,
답글삭제Your paragraph is so detail that I can imagine your place so easy. And I like your picture too. Your picture makes me to imagine so concrete. But, when I read your paragraph, I was so confused that is your final point. In your paragraph, you use "Most importantly" so I think "Oh this is very important thing". But right after that word, you use again ". Finally, this is the most important thing". So this is confused to me. Please, I want you to combine or restructure this two things
Thanks
DuKi