2015년 11월 27일 금요일

Opinion Writing

 

The Powerful Weapon to Change the World

     
Figure1. smiling children

  Many developing countries suffer from poverty and hunger. When viewing the below chart one can see that people who living on less than $2 per day is more than 50% in many developing countries. Advanced countries help them to improve things, However, it is nessesary to fundemental development in their sociaty. In my opinion, education is the best strategies to achieve social development in developing countries. Thus, I think that we should support them to improve their educational environment.
 
 
Figure 2. People Living on less than $2 per day


  First, Education enables those in paid formal employment to earn higher wages. Better-educated individuals in wage employment are paid more to reward them for their higher productivity. (1)According to The UN Secretary-General's Global Initiative on Education, on average, one year of education is associated with a 10% increase in wage earnings. Also, education helps protect working men and women from exploitation by increasing their opportunities to obtain secure contracts. (2)In El Salvador, only 5% of workers with less than primary education have an employment contract, leaving them noticeably vulnerable. By contrast, 47% of those with secondary education work under signed contracts.

  Second, Mothers’ education has saved millions of children’s lives. (3)Due to The United Nation Development Program 'Human Development Index' published on 2004, if the women in developing countries gets one more year of schooling, 5-10% of infant mortality rate decreases. Educated mothers are more likely to give birth with the help of a midwife or other skilled birth attendant. (2)Around 40% of all under-5 deaths occur within the first 28 days of life, the majority being due to complications during delivery. A literate mother is, on average, 23% more likely to have a skilled attendant at birth. And, Educated mothers are likely to ensure their children are vaccinated. (1)According to The UN Secretary-General's Global Initiative on Education, if all women in low and lower middle income countries had completed secondary education, the probability of a child receiving immunization against the diseases incident to childhood such as diphtheria, tetanus and whooping cough, would have increased by 43%.

  Third, Educated children has the excellent potential for leading society. There is an organization named 'Compassion'. This organization built the school for educating children in developing countries. (4)Their Child Development Program provides opportunities that encourage healthy development in four areas spiritual, physical, social and economic. (5)In 2008, Dr. Bruce Wydick, a professor of economics and international studies at the University of San Francisco, conducted a study of Compassion’s Child Sponsorship Program to determine its impact on the adult life outcomes of formerly sponsored children against those of children who were not part of the ministry’s programs. The research found that former Compassion sponsored children were more likely to be leaders in their communities and churches. They were 30 to 75 percent more likely to become community leaders as adults than their non-sponsored peers. This means that future generations of children will have better opportunities, inspiring role-models and strong voices to speak up for them.
 
Figure3. The Reserch from  Dr. Bruce Wydick


 (5)Nelson Mandela said that education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world. I think that education gives them the strength for earning higher wages, saving children, and leading their future. This also means that conduce to the peace and progress of the world.

Reference:

(1) UN Secretary-General's Global Initiative on Education, http://globaleducationfirst.org/ 
(2) Sustainable Development begins with education-How education can contribute to the proposed post-2015 goals, Published in 2014, the United Nations Educational, Scientific and Cultural Organization 7
(3) Ronald J. Sider, Rich Christians in an Age of hunger, IVP
      Human Development Report in 1992, pp-12-25
(4) 한국 컴패션, '전인적인 양육'이란 무엇이며, 왜 중요한가요?, http://www.compassion.or.kr/eventAmount/raising_main.aspx 
(accessed Dec 5, 2015)

Figure1. International Day for the Eradication of Poverty, Saturday, October 17, 2015, http://www.timeanddate.com/holidays/un/international-day-for-poverty-eradication (accessed Nov 28, 2015)

Figure2. Poverty Statistics & Graphs: Looking Beyond the Numbers Published Apr 2011, http://www.poverties.org/poverty-statistics.html

Figure3. Compassion Works: Research Proves It!, https://www.compassion.com.au/blog/april-2013/compassion-works-research-proves-it!, Apr 4, 2014


2015년 11월 17일 화요일

2015년 11월 14일 토요일

Blog Post #5


 

Extra Motivation

figure1. motivation
 

 As I wrote about the changes of the Internet Age, I realized that the platform is very important nowadays. There are many platforms that we log onto everyday such as Naver, Youtube and so on. These had been just my lovely tools for my convenience before, however, while doing research, I thought about the businesses that is working though the platforms. Some people make money or gain worldwide fame with one click. And, people can easily share their idea on the platform. After I knew it, I decided to response this change quickly. Especially, I like making images. So I have an account on Youtube and upload my video. It means many people can watch my video, and leave a comment. I think it gives me extra motivation and helps me to improve my work. 
 
Reference:
Figure1. 7 Essential Resources for Understanding Motivation in Games, http://www.motivateplay.com/2013/04/647/ (accessed Nov 14, 2015)